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ENG 1001 09

K. Jagasia

Final Exam Persuasive Essay Prewriting

Elysia Ambler

Jill Rebholz

Edgar Magallanes

Alex Blumenshine

ENG 1001-09

April 29, 2004

 

3 Reasons for topic

-Punishing children in public is wrong

-Self-esteem goes down

-Learn manners the right way, not fear

1. It's not morally right anymore.

2. 42% of children are mentally challenge because of being beat.

3. Dr. Hibert from Springfield Medical Facility has done research on children who have gotten beat.

4. For example, Ed Eastsport and Willy Wigworm, from two seperate families has both been beat and both experience learning problems today.

5. If you don't beat your child it will end up a criminal, but violence is not the answer.

Veronica Vazquez

Osiris Vasquez

Tanya Burash

David Weiden

Kayla Russell

Eng 1001

 

 

 

 

 

Community Service should be mandatory

1. cleaner environment

2. more things accomplished

3. helping people is rewarding

 

 

5 methods of Persuasion

Why? It is rewarding and nice to help out people.

Fact? 85% of the United States is cleaner due to community service

Authority George W. Bush supports the fact that community service should be mandatory

Examples After public events, with community service will help clean these areas faster

Answering the Opposition sometimes people do not have time to put in hours of community service. However you do not have to do it all at the same time. We can do and hour sometimes half an hour depending on availability.

 

Elysia Ambler

Jill Rebholz

Edgar Magallanes

Alex Blumenshine

ENG 1001-09

April 29, 2004

3 Reasons for Topic

-Test hair product and makeup on

-Look for cures for diseases

-Cloning

1. We should have the right to know what wer are taking/using.

2. 57% of untested drugs kills humans.

3. Dr. Korvorykian from the Mayo Clinic, states that 57% of untested drugs kills humans.

4. For example, scienitsts did a research on Jimmi John and was given untested "Super Glow Hair Shine" and died 2 days later.

5. It is wrong to experiment on animals, yet it's for our humans safety.

Johanna Esquivel

Heather Broad

Kim Landstrom

Tony Arjes

Jamie Sloan

 

 

TOPIC:

Community service should not be mandatory.

 

Why?

1.) Should be able to have the choice to volunteer

2.) One would feel like it is punishment, if made to do something.

3.) Community service is taking away jobs, from city workers

 

Facts & Authority.

1.) 55% of jobs are taken away by volunteering, according to Unemployment.com

 

Example

1.) A homeless man was turned down for a job because they used mandatory community service to full fill that job. Now he is still homeless and not being able to support his needy family

 

Answering the Opposition

1.) The state would have to spend more money on supp

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K. Jagasia

English 1001-09

28 April 2004

Topic: Parents should have a right to punish their own children.

3 Reasons

1. To teach them right from wrong.

2. Kids need punishment in order to respect authority.

3. The behaviors of the child reflect the parents so who other than the parents should have control over these behaviors.

Facts

63% of urban kids end up in gangs or killed before the age of 25, due to the lack of punishment, according to the Chicago Tribune.

85% of kids who are punished have more respect for authority.

Authority

as stated above

Examples

Jacie Brooks, a 14 year old whose father was never around and mother put down no rules, ended up as a juvenile delinquent for stealing food at a local supermarket.

Answering the Opposition

If the parents don’t have that right to punish their own children then who does? And if it is somebody else, will those ideas and ways agree with those of the parents? More than likely they will not.

 

Leah Taylor

 

Adam Fann

 

Kelsi Tallent

 

Cody Williamson

 

K. Jagasia

English 1001-09

28 April 2004

Topic: A number of years of schooling kills the inner motivation of a child.

3 Reasons

1. Too much of the same thing makes you think continuing is pointless.

2. All information is learned in the freshman year and after that all information is a repeat.

3. When kids have no motivation they are less likely to learn something.

Facts

as stated in the authority

60% of kids who finish high school do not further their education due to their beliefs that they cannot learn anything new.

Authority

According to a survey taken by Professor Dod, 75% of students find that they learn nothing new after their freshman year.

Examples

For example, Bobby Jo felt she wasn’t learning anything new and decided to drop out of school and find a job.

Answering the Opposition

Opponents may claim that in each new year of school you will learn something new, but the truth is it’s all repetitive material.

 

 

 

eather Broad

Kim Landstrom

Tony Arjes

Jamie Sloan

 

TOPIC:

Personnel on essential duty do not have the right to go on strike

 

Why?

1.) We need them , no one would respond

 

2.) Chaos would break out

 

3.) More deaths would result

 

Facts

1.) In 1984 a riot in NY,NY the plice were on strike and as a result 62 out of 84 were critically injured, but if police were not on strike damages could have been minimized according to CNN

Authority

Stopping violence.org

 

Example

911- if all police, firemen, and doctors were on strike during this time, the outcome could have been devastatingly worse

 

Opposition

Although everyone has the right to strike essential personnel shouldn’t have a choice they should realize their whole existence is based on helping others and saving